do something
④have fun (in) doing something
⑤say goodbye to somebody
其中,第一句式The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. 我们也可以用其它表达法:The farm workers warmly welcomed us. 或The people in the farm received us warmly等。
(2)注意用词表达得当
用词不当,会影响文章内容的正确表达。如:NMET 98的高考书面表达有如下要点:警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者。有的学生用He let us catch an other off ender.这种表达就没有He made us catch the next of fender. 来得恰当。因为文中是因违章被罚,站在路边抓其他违章者一事带有强迫性质,用“let”语意太轻,应改用make。
(3)重视英语虚词的使用
“看图写话”所提供的图画内容要点,通常是分幅叙述,相互之间没有逻辑的联系。这就要求考生按照合理的顺序,将句子连珠成串。在不连贯时,可适当使用一些过渡性的连接词,如and,then,however,besides,thus等,这样使人看上去脉络清晰,层次分明,文理通顺,意思连贯。如:NMET 97范文中使用连词and达到5次,NMET 98使用连词and达到3次,NMET 99使用连词and达到4次,NMET 2000使用连词and达到3次,then l次,but l次。
5.结尾自然有力
文章结尾要干净、利落,既不能拉杂,也不能草率,要显得自然,恰当得体。请看如表1所示的例子:
年份
文章结尾句
NMET 1992
At four o’clock, we said goodbye and set off for home.
NMET 1993
It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.
NMET 1998
The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
NMET 1999
I hope you come and see for yourself some day.
NMET 2000
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
总之,做好看图写话的书面表达题,要做到内容切题,要点明确,文理通顺,语言正确,篇幅适中,开门见山,结尾自然。
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